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We can tear down the science

And see what's left behind

Let us kill all the Giants

Then race completely blind


Let me come to break
All the brick stone walls
That you always seem to make


We will return to our carnal state

And come to mix all our blood

Let us do nothing but procreate

Then rebirth through the mud


Let me seek out the thrills
Without the ever-present hand
That always seems to kill

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~aliems Jan 10, 2010   Writer
i love the structure ot the poem.
how you've spaced out the lines in some of the stanza's,
gives excitement and something to look foward to ^^

i think a war or something is going on
...i also think i might be chatting bollocks ^^
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