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Kidnapped

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He held her hair
Covered her mouth
"Shhhh" long and drawn out

Soft whimpers came out
from behind the hand

"Its okay
I have you now
and forever"

A few tears
landed on the hand

"You can't leave now
but I know you wouldn't want to
Isn't that right?"

A few more tears
A few louder whimpers

"I couldn't hear you?"
He pulled the brown hair
Then pushed down
the back of her head

"Good...
Goooood"

"I want to tell you the pain you caused me. All the sleepness nights. All the hours spent watching you."

Between the whimpers came a broken cry "p-p-ple-ple-ase"

"Are you really going to interrupt my perfect love story?" He moved her head side to side while watching her eyes water. "I didn't think so."
"As I was saying I saw you while on the way to work that first time and thought nothing of it.  You were there waiting for the bus.  Such a beautiful girl should not be riding the bus.  But you were there and I kept going.  I didn't you see you the next day so I thought that was good of you to finally find another way. When I saw you back there a couple of weeks later I became at first distraught.  At work I grew angry I couldn't focus on anything else."

The tears were falling faster.  Dripping from the hand to her dress.

"I knew I had to save you.  It would have to be me.  If I didn't do it soon enough someone else might take you away and do something horrible.  Can you imagine that? Someone ruining that beautiful face?"
I'm trying prose.

Wondering if I should continue?

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DrawingGirl4's avatar
Why can't I do this to my ex boyfriend? Do-Don't look at me like that! He leaked my personal info on 4CHAN FOR GODS SAKE!